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A jam submission

SFAS24 - Dreams in the StarsView project page

An art piece based on the theme "It's full of stars"
Submitted by ParanoiaBarry — 1 day, 7 hours before the deadline

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SFAS24 - Dreams in the Stars's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Final Presentation#472.6672.667
Creative Development#532.5002.500
Technical / Workflow#572.3332.333
Research + Development#592.3332.333
Overall#602.4002.400
Project Documentation#612.1672.167

Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • I would refine textures and modeling to look more highres (and put more life/quality) if you look for archiviz. The theme being around the stars, I would have focus more on staging around the telescope.
  • Hi Maddison, I really enjoy the space, feels cozy! I actually thought the work-in-progress vid was even cozier with that one light but I understand why you added more. The space tells a great story with all the decorations and subtle space hints. I love how it ends with the telescope looking up at the fireworks, really made me smile. If I could say the one thing that would help push your work from here would be to look at adding some surface variation in the roughness on objects. A lot of them appear smooth and without variation. Nice one.
  • The overall scene looks quite nicey filled out, and you've paid good attention to details such as skirting boards etc. It would have been really nice to see this care extend to the assets too, as I see various bits on eg. the telescope that are intersecting (it's possibly not even set right on the table) and there are some things that could do with a few more edge divisions. It would have been good to see your workflow more in your documentation, as I have no visibility on your techncial process.

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