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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Final Presentation | #42 | 2.921 | 3.200 |
Technical / Workflow | #47 | 2.556 | 2.800 |
Overall | #51 | 2.629 | 2.880 |
Creative Development | #52 | 2.556 | 2.800 |
Research + Development | #53 | 2.556 | 2.800 |
Project Documentation | #54 | 2.556 | 2.800 |
Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Pretty cohesive overall, it's simple but it all ties together. Nice to see things like the lighting making sense and having proper sources/not being too dark or bright. Just mind a couple of places where round things needed some extra edge divisions to create a smooth silhouette to match the rest of the scene.
- Nice use of tileables and trims, and nice to see software like substance designer as well as UE Shader work. The overall result is really nice, but would be improved with some further prop work and atmospherics like fog in the Genshin reference.
- Your asset creation isn't that bad, but there are multiples problems in your dressing which is making it look your scene empty. If you look at your references, aside of the library, there are a lot of details on the ground, atmosphere and lighting. The layout itself of your scene isn't bad but lack of elements and work.
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