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A jam submission

A Solitary Temple Among Arid SandsView project page

A magical temple hidden in the desert oasis.
Submitted by IPixel24 — 1 hour, 43 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Research + Development#273.2863.600
Final Presentation#283.2863.600
Overall#323.1773.480
Technical / Workflow#323.1043.400
Project Documentation#353.2863.600
Creative Development#362.9213.200

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • It a good job. You should focus on texture quality (/texel resolution) and also be careful about visible seems (your VFX). In your video, you should show only what you dressed : there is no dressing underwater, it's not a selling point). Focus on putting quality on what is visible and critical path.
  • Smart move to enclose the environment with rocks, this not only felt fitting in this case but it gave you a nice small area to work with without worrying about what's outside. Generally feels pretty cohesive - just watch that your texel rate is the same aross the scene, the rocks feel like they've been scaled up a lot as the details are a lot larger compared to other elements in the scene. The bridge either needed a few more edge divisions to make that top edge smooth, or possibly better, needed to be designed to be much more angular so that the angles look deliberate and the bridge matches the tower more.

Challenge Tier

Rising Star

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