Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

• This is an oddly concepted idea, with very little cohesion or direction. The separate pieces and timing do not fit well together. Each element is quite poor quality - from the single frame of chunky smoke, to the slim lightning bolts, to the very flat energy beam, to the unrealistic fog. The environment, though not critical to the VFX presentation, is too simple and cartoonish. These would not be appropriate for a game. This should go back to the fundamentals - of WHAT you are trying to do in a game, and examples of where it has worked before.