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A jam submission

Lost GirlView game page

A short story about a missing girl.
Submitted by gaelrdrgz (@gael_rdrgz) — 1 day, 2 hours before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Monsterous!#1442.2363.000
Scariness...#1481.9382.600
Fun#1491.9382.600
Halloweeny?#1521.7892.400
Overall#1521.9082.560
Candy!!#1541.6402.200

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Log Line
If you hate life, you will invoke death.

Content Warnings
References to death

Team Members
Created by: gaelrdrgz
Written by: Mariana Ortiz

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Comments

A Godot game! I'm always jealous of Godot games, it seems like a really neat engine but I don't know it at all. You did some very cool things with the lighting in particular. But the art style feels all over the place--anime characters, pixel art sprites, AI backgrounds. It would be better to pick one style and stick with it.

Developer

Godot is a great and powerful engine, try it! Well, I took the easy way out, I took all the assets form internet and that's why there is no consistency. I would have loved to use only one style, but due to lack of time and experience I couldn't. I hope to work better on this aspect in future projects. Thank you very much for your comment, by the way.

Neat visual effects, like the UI as well. The core of the story could probably work but definitely needs some exposition (and a proofread pass would work well too)

Developer

Thank you very much for your comment, it really means a lot to me. About the story, I found it a bit difficult to make something better mainly because of lack of time, it's my first visual novel, so, it's part of the learning process, I guess.

(+1)

Congrats on your first VN then!