Seems like there’s a very interesting idea for a setting looming around here. While I think that the writing could use some touch-ups to add more detail and build-up the world, this short segment of it does showcase a lot of potential space for characters and “wild” adventures. However, that’s really as much as I can comment towards right now. I am left with some curiosity towards how you’re going to do the visuals and the rest of the story though.

Ironically, we already had a similar idea for this once, only with a biologist and wacky marine creatures and what not, so I funnily found some semblance with this. Good luck on writing the rest of this! Cheers! 🐳

I unironically love your minimalist placeholder images :) The writing and buildup was good, and I laughed as the novel suddenly ran out and realized that it had to end!

I like the concept would be nice to see it finished! I need a detailed drawing of the BIG WIGGLY BUG THE SIZE OF A CAT.