I absolutely LOVE the premise of selectively removing parts of a contract to change the wording in your favour. Like, this could absolutely be a much bigger game, and if I could see the effects of that changed contract (i.e. changing “a new carpet” to “a new pet”), even superficially like through a little graphic in the room, would be awesome and really funny. The western theming doesn’t feel obligatory at all, even though the premise could work in a whole bunch of settings – the bluntness of literally shooting parts of the contract out, and the tension between the free and earthly cowboy versus. the encroaching capitalist that threatens to turn the frontier into the same orderly society that the outlaw has cast off, is just sooo tasty. I’m always here for verbose parodies of law and business language. Awesome project!