Just read through and I think its great! One small suggestion (as you still have time before the jam is over) on the Map of the Crashed Hauler, some of the "Horizontal" lines in the background image look like connecting lines between a few of the rooms (Showers to Impromptu Mess, and to a lesser extent  Collected Stock to Converted Bunks) this could be made more clear by adding a black stroke around the rooms so it breaks the lines up enough for your eye to realize there isn't a connection point there.

Again, great job!