A browser game made in HTML5.
Visually and programmatically, you ate. I have no comments other than well done. I loved the panning around the scenes when introducing the new setting. The only thing I semi-hoped for was the time to be displayed on the clock when it was said in the narrative, but I get that you were reusing the same BG throughout so that made sense as to why you didn't want to make different versions of it lol.
Narratively, there's some gaps. I do like the daily news bulletins, but while we're dropped in the middle of the story, we're not quite dropped at the middle of the action nor explanation.
Which is mostly to say, I wasn't sure where the plot was pointing towards with enough certainty throughout. I wonder if it would be just a bit stronger/more coherent if we opened up on a former abduction (e.g. disposing of the corpse perhaps?)
Something that would help set the tone for what would happen and tie it back in to what we see on the screen, waiting in anticipation, or something that more definitively pointed to where the plot was looking other than the underlying sense of unease throughout.
The characters also felt a bit stilted (also how did the bee not have work but the bear did? was work optional in a sort of animal crossing utopian way?). A little more direct reactions to the events (like the half-changed) might have helped characterize them further.
Fantastic presentation and first effort though.
