i think this is really well written! it’s kind of amazing that the game could still be engaging even without graphics or much gameplay features. one thing i’d suggest about Kitty’s part, because i found the flow to be a bit strange when there was no mentioning or observation of any look-a-like peelz until it was presented to her. maybe at least a question or response to her about that would be nice. i had good fun, great job!
Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it. I'm definitely going to spend more time on this post-jam, so I'll make sure to take this into account when I polish Kitty's dialogue.
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I think this is a nicely-structured mystery, even though it's in an early state. I'm glad you sent it in even though you don't have graphics yet!
i think this is really well written! it’s kind of amazing that the game could still be engaging even without graphics or much gameplay features. one thing i’d suggest about Kitty’s part, because i found the flow to be a bit strange when there was no mentioning or observation of any look-a-like peelz until it was presented to her. maybe at least a question or response to her about that would be nice. i had good fun, great job!
Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it. I'm definitely going to spend more time on this post-jam, so I'll make sure to take this into account when I polish Kitty's dialogue.