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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Originality / Creativity! | #18 | 3.674 | 4.500 |
Challenge Balance! | #29 | 3.266 | 4.000 |
Fun Factor! | #31 | 3.266 | 4.000 |
Replayability! | #34 | 2.449 | 3.000 |
Overall | #39 | 2.994 | 3.667 |
Lore / Narrative! | #40 | 2.858 | 3.500 |
Playtime Length! | #45 | 2.449 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- 'If a Hero interacts with the mirror...' is a fairly vague instruction which could have been expressed better. This too applies to note 'H' and the angel (doctor who theme plays in the background) - it is unclear if it is possible to defeat this angel (you don't provide any statistic for it (although it could be a gargoyle), which means that escaping the dungeon is negated because the panel can't be found whilst there is a monster in the room. I did like the use of the Alchemist's Bench to transmit a message across time to the future. Overall this Quest has a lot of potential, but requires further polish to ensure playability.
- This is such a clever idea for a quest - being able to create the same layout across the board for the players is very clever indeed. I think Zargon will have his work cut out for him balancing the timelines - but it will be well worth it for such a clever concept for the heroes to play through. It would be SO great to have some past activities helping the future players (aside from searches). A great quest - well done!
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Time is an awesome concept and a great quest. However, the quest PDF itself has the hquestbuilder and quest author attributions cut off at the bottom, resulting in an unfortunate disqualification. :(
i asked multiple times in your resubmission thread if my quest will get a resubmission link and i was told the quest is fine :(
yep, you're right.
I'll requalify it on the grounds that I passed it without checking carefully, and just take the heat for it. The hquestbuilder and your creator name should have been visible at the bottom, and that's a major thing I've held everyone to. But I can see plain as day that I did tell you your quests was fine even when you asked about resubmitted a corrected version yourself.
Sorry for the trouble :)
I don't want to make any trouble. It would be fine if the quest just could have its small moment like all the other quests. In the end we will all get our knight when the dread moon rises on the horizon :)
really cool , great use of elf and normal furniture. Good short story
Hi, thanks a lot.