Judge feedback

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• The opening crawl seems a little bit like it is supposed to be notes for the Evil Wizard Player, rather than information for the Heroes before set off on another adventure. I like that there are multiple routes through this dungeon, although I am not keen on traps that leave Heroes stranded (i.e. the falling block in the corridor to the left of the centre room) as this can be upsetting for players (of all ages!) who have invested time and effort into their characters. The use of terms like 'in front' can be very misleading, especially in relation to the mechanic you have created for the appearance of new monsters in the dungeon, it could have been better expressed. Overall a solid, although at times somewhat confused.
• A really nicely constructed quest - the hidden rooms with the chests are a nice touch - and the various pathways to the confrontation with the Dread Sorcerer have been well laid out - well done and good luck!