Judge feedback

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• Nice use of the word 'Heretofore'. I like the story-rich content in the notes. I do like the mechanic for the reveal of the 'Horn of Durgin'; although I am concerned that the note might prevent the Heroes from realising that there is a (unusual) task to perform to retrieve the object of this Quest. Overall a very strong Quest.
• There is a lot going on in this quest - and not in a bad way! The natural limitation of one page hasn't limited your ability to create a really well structured narrative and combination of narratives that would lead to a very satisfying end-game encounter. One minor point to consider, could be to make it so that the heroes don't arrive and leave through the same entrance - possibly connecting up door C, or having the defeat of the Dread Heroes lead to an exit too... but that's very minor indeed. A great quest that has considered the rules for the jam very well indeed!