Judge feedback

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• Some great mechanics introduced in this quest - the paths to the exit would allow for a nice about of replayability, and the additional narrative really add a nice depth to this well written quest - well done!
• Your crawl is a concise set-up for the Quest. I like the mechanic of the 'ALARM'; although I think terms like 'behind' can be confusing. At note 'B' it is unclear if by the term 'gear' you mean all their Equipment, Quest Treasures (Artifacts), Potions, Spells and other items or just their weaponry and armour. I think the mechanic you have created for the destruction of the Flesh Cauldron is imaginative. I particularly like that there are two (perhaps three) routes to the exit stairway. Overall a solid Quest that could be improved with more consideration of the Notes text.