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A jam submission

Grak-Thar's Magical LairView project page

Orc Warlock Grak-Thar has been experimenting with new Chaos Magic as he seeks revenge for his father's death.
Submitted by dwiechpr (@dwiechpr) — 1 day, 9 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Originality / Creativity!#64.3334.333
Replayability!#93.6673.667
Playtime Length!#103.6673.667
Lore / Narrative!#114.0004.000
Overall#113.8333.833
Challenge Balance!#153.6673.667
Fun Factor!#233.6673.667

Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • Wow - there's a lot of intricate detail in this quest. The use of the annotation in the centre room took a moment to figure out, but nice touch! You do seem to have some inaccessible rooms in the lower right portion of the map - though I'm sure this could be rectified with a door :) The reanimation of creatures is a great concept and adds a really nice twist to the end of this quest. Great work and good luck!
  • This Quest has some great original ideas. It would have been easier to just note that all Orcs have a gemstone rather than little the map with 'A' letters which makes the map a little unclear. I like the idea of using the central room area as an open foyer, but it was unnecessary to spell this out in the way you have and this also added to my confusion as you map has become unnecessarily cluttered. I like the mechanic you have developed for the resurrection of the slain Orcs, however I think the way you lay out your notes and your use of language could have been more considered and potentially allowed for a clearer set of Notes.

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@dwiechpr

Name of Quest
Grak-Thar's Magical Lair

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