A couple of suggestions I'd have is changing the music every scene to fit the story, and maybe adding a few choices for the player - even if they don't matter that much to the general storyline. Ink is a good plugin for this. :D
Thank you for the feedback. I made it with Ren'Py so I could have easily added choices if I wanted to. But I never planned on adding any haha. Sorry about that.
I wondered if I should have submitted it to this jam or not since there is no gameplay. But I really liked the theme of "Just Finish It" as I was struggling to finish this visual novel. So it helped motivate me to finish it in the end.
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I really liked playing it!
A couple of suggestions I'd have is changing the music every scene to fit the story, and maybe adding a few choices for the player - even if they don't matter that much to the general storyline. Ink is a good plugin for this. :D
Hello, I'm glad you enjoyed playing it. :)
Thank you for the feedback. I made it with Ren'Py so I could have easily added choices if I wanted to. But I never planned on adding any haha. Sorry about that.
I wondered if I should have submitted it to this jam or not since there is no gameplay. But I really liked the theme of "Just Finish It" as I was struggling to finish this visual novel. So it helped motivate me to finish it in the end.
Thank you for hosting it!
Oh, yes. There was no problem with the submission. :D