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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
The Transformation! Is it a cool TF? | #2 | 4.250 | 4.250 |
Excitement! Does it make you want to play it? | #3 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Creativity! Is it unique? | #4 | 4.250 | 4.250 |
Overall | #4 | 3.900 | 3.900 |
Extras? Bells and whistles besides the writing? | #4 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
The Writing! Is it enjoyable prose? | #7 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- This looks really fun, I love how much additional content you give to assist the GM, makes it feel really easy to run and opens up a lot directions for the adventure to go.
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Creator - Valentine
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A cool adventure, I like the idea of a magical storm creating all sorts of problems for the players ^^.
However while the pdf explains some of its setting specific lingo I would have loved it if it included a small overview of what the setting is about. This way I had to search for the creator's patreon to get that information. The PDF also currently refers to an attached map but there is none. However there is a description of the ship.
Thank you for taking the time to look at my module and provide feedback! I really appreciate it and am always looking to improve my modules that are already out and new ones going forwards!
I will be sure to add that setting information and see about updating the text concerning the map! Thank you again for your valuable feedback!
No problem, glad I could provide something of value ^^