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A jam submission

Headlong FlightView project page

A Transformational Adventure in the Skies of Alvez
Submitted by ValentineTF — 87 days, 3 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
The Transformation! Is it a cool TF?#24.2504.250
Excitement! Does it make you want to play it?#34.0004.000
Creativity! Is it unique?#44.2504.250
Overall#43.9003.900
Extras? Bells and whistles besides the writing?#43.5003.500
The Writing! Is it enjoyable prose?#73.5003.500

Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

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  • This looks really fun, I love how much additional content you give to assist the GM, makes it feel really easy to run and opens up a lot directions for the adventure to go.

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Submitted(+1)

A cool adventure, I like the idea of a magical storm creating all sorts of problems for the players ^^.

However while the pdf explains some of its setting specific lingo I would have loved it if it included a small overview of what the setting is about. This way I had to search for the creator's patreon to get that information. The PDF also currently refers to an attached map but there is none. However there is a description of the ship.

Developer(+1)

Thank you for taking the time to look at my module and provide feedback!  I really appreciate it and am always looking to improve my modules that are already out and new ones going forwards!

I will be sure to add that setting information and see about updating the text concerning the map!  Thank you again for your valuable feedback!

Submitted

No problem, glad I could provide something of value ^^