I really enjoyed this one. there was a lot of really well done descriptions and creative writing, I also loved how you speak to the player after they die to question them on their horrible choice lol, could maybe have some more encounters with the killer/monster 

I love the theme around it compared to what everyone else has done you have done something a bit more in the wild/outside

i like how the story gives you help after a fail/loss, but i feel like there could be more danger. aside from that its great

I really like how the setting is a campfire, however you could make the main bad guy appear more instead of the ending just not seeing him.