Starting a story with “putrid scent” is extremely powerful imo. I really enjoyed your rich word choices. I like how bringing the demons through the castle is the maze. My favorite part is teleporting the books and dropping them to lead the demon where you want him. I got a pleasantly creepy feeling when it ended darkly!
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An Inexact Pact's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Writing Quality | #1 | 4.143 | 4.143 |
| Story Quality | #3 | 3.429 | 3.429 |
| Overall Creativity | #4 | 3.714 | 3.714 |
Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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