I really adore the aesthetic of this visual novel, and I adore how much of a threat Luma(??) is because truly, you can't tell what's going on with them and the way the world is structures is like a soft version of Wonderland but more dreamy and disconnected from reality like it's in space. It's just so cool and the ending?? Man I was so terrified seeing that image, excited to see more of how you plan out!
Edit: I just replayed the entire updated demo and honestly I had such a blast with it. Each art was just *chefs kiss* I loved how dreamy and colorful it was, you really retained the dreamy aspect of the original demo but also elevated it further. I'm very curious about the new plot in mind and the mystery behind it all that is just raving me up. I love how things turned out (especially with the mystery), I'm looking forward to what comes next!
that was so good and creative, i loved the game!