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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Creative | #17 | 3.266 | 4.000 |
| Technical | #17 | 2.858 | 3.500 |
| Presentation | #22 | 2.449 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #23 | 2.531 | 3.100 |
| Research & Development | #26 | 2.041 | 2.500 |
| Documentation | #27 | 2.041 | 2.500 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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beautiful sculpt through to finished character. I would consider the particles being more 3d. i wished the document was more substantial. A superb character non the less!!!!!
Cool piece, i like the design and colour scheme. Posing and primary forms could use a little work, it's just a little bit stiff
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Interesting piece over all, and good choice in concept, caught my eye!
-Good color and value separation translated from concept to 3d, especially in the cloths.
-Nice addition of particles and pose to add life to the character – base could be of a darker value as to not distract from the pice.
-Be careful with areas such as hair flow , hand scale and also face stiffness.
-It would be nice to see a tail to add more flow to the right hand side of the piece : )