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-Good use of materials especially for areas such as the metal plateing – nice touch with the worn detail to the pants and gauntlet.

-Good color choice over all and value separations , perhaps  add a tertiary color  e.g. a cream or orange to help push contrast and reduce mudyness  This can be added through the lighting or on accents on the amour.

-Watch out for anatomical detail such as the size of the legs and waists. Increase the size will add more weight to the pice and give the character more ‘character’.

Grate piece over all, !

-Nice initial shot, grate mood, pose and over all framing. – values of lighting is perhaps a little dark and more emphasize could be put towards the light source and brim of the hat using stronger rim lights.

-on closer inspection, surface detail could be more implied, stronger normal’s and sculpted detail to indicate different material changes is key to creating a realistic piece. – besides that , good work with the color choice.

 -good work with the topology over all,  nice density. Perhaps areas around the shoulders can show more edge flow.

Interesting piece over all, and good choice in concept, caught my eye!

-Good color and value separation translated from concept to 3d, especially in the cloths.

-Nice addition of particles and pose to add life to the character – base could be of a darker value as to not distract from the pice.

-Be careful with areas such as hair flow , hand scale and also face stiffness.

-It would be nice to see a tail to add more flow to the right hand side of the piece : )