Really solid mechanics. I like the visuals too! Add some sounds, complete the story and you have a pretty fun game :)

Keep it up!

I'm intrigued by the story, very mysterious and interesting build-up. The platforming mechanics are nice and feel good to use but are definitely OP (a consequence of time I'm assuming). The settings are phenomenal, the foreground and background art have such a mysterious style to them, and the particles are very tasteful.

Great first release, congrats on the release!

The art doesn't look rushed at all! Congrats on finishing your first jam, it really can be a challenge to follow all the way through, especially when you start to hit roadblocks or start to realize you're not going to be able to do everything you wanted. 

I thought visually it was above average for this jam, at least from the entries I've played lol. I missed the blurb where it told me how to glide because I picked up the key early, but I was able to make the jump anyways. The character controller is already a step above most people's first 2d platformer. I think with a little work to refine it, maybe some more movement mechanics, it could be a pretty solid experience. 

I wish I could have seen more of the narrative, I'm sure you wrote a lot more than what got into the game, that's always how it goes with gam jams. Hope you're able to keep up the progress and continue developing it.