>You sit next to your favorite VTuber

I don't think this is a useful Line if you want People to identify themselves with the Character they're playing. 

>You're one comfie awoomfie

This also isn't a Line I'd put into anything.

Why are we both completely uninjured after a Plane crash, why am I a Dog?

Why is everything insinuating that Haru crashed the Plane because he felt like it, why is his first Thought after that he is Hungry?

So now Haru doesn't want to hurt the mean Condor, but crashing a Plane because he's a cool Demon works?

What's an awoomfie?

So far the only Person I completely understand is Robin being entirely distressed by whatever crazy Person Haru is.

So I'm a Dog who not only stores the Key from the Lumberjack in my Fur somehow, but also grabs the Axe? That makes absolutely no Sense.

Requests make no Sense, the writing makes no Sense. Suddenly in the Forest my VTuber disappeared and I guess become a Monster randomly walking around? The Forest Puzzle itself also makes no Sense. I know it's a classic Thing, but it needs a Way to solve it that isn't brute Force. Either hints on the Individual Maps where to go, a Way to find the Answer beforehand or anything.

Got cought by the Demon in the House when looking for Airplane Food, going to end this here. For an Adventure Horror Game you need a better and proper Story, if you're this Dialogue heavy, actual good Dialogue you can immerse yourself into, not me being a Dog that handles everything like a Human with my VTuber friend crashing a Plane on Purpose then turning into a Monster. 

Apart from the Story Aspect, your Window is too small, it causes the Font to get a lot of Artifacts on the Text making it needlessly hard to read. There is no clear Progression going on, it seems like random Events strung together.

This is probably not the Game for me.