why you direct us to wix site it take us lot more time to test your test but here my views :
I want to say that you are stating at the good place & promise that you will complete your game.
In my vison
your gameplay is so good and its keep me interested about 12 minutes. here my suggestion :
your core gameplay it's so good and you need to just add some visual and audio and some maps [levels] its will become perfect game .
मेरी दृष्टि में
मैं कहना चाहता हूं कि आप अच्छी जगह घूर रहे हैं और वादा करते हैं कि आप अपना खेल पूरा करेंगे।आपका गेमप्ले इतना अच्छा है और यह मुझे लगभग 12 मिनट तक दिलचस्पी रखता है। यहाँ मेरा सुझाव है:
आपका कोर गेमप्ले यह बहुत अच्छा है और आपको बस कुछ दृश्य और ऑडियो और कुछ नक्शे [स्तर] जोड़ना होगायह सही खेल बन जाएगा।
It will be much easier for people to download and test your game if you upload it to itch. What is the use of directing user to a wix site. You haven't even took the efforts to make the google drive's link a hyperlink. It is just a plain text. It seems your are trying really hard to not get your game played. Just think about it. The moderators and hosts will have no way to verify that this is indeed your game, if you redirect them to some google drive.
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why you direct us to wix site it take us lot more time to test your test but here my views :
I want to say that you are stating at the good place & promise that you will complete your game.
In my vison
your gameplay is so good and its keep me interested about 12 minutes. here my suggestion :
your core gameplay it's so good and you need to just add some visual and audio and some maps [levels] its will become perfect game .
मेरी दृष्टि में
मैं कहना चाहता हूं कि आप अच्छी जगह घूर रहे हैं और वादा करते हैं कि आप अपना खेल पूरा करेंगे।आपका गेमप्ले इतना अच्छा है और यह मुझे लगभग 12 मिनट तक दिलचस्पी रखता है। यहाँ मेरा सुझाव है:
आपका कोर गेमप्ले यह बहुत अच्छा है और आपको बस कुछ दृश्य और ऑडियो और कुछ नक्शे [स्तर] जोड़ना होगायह सही खेल बन जाएगा।
It will be much easier for people to download and test your game if you upload it to itch. What is the use of directing user to a wix site. You haven't even took the efforts to make the google drive's link a hyperlink. It is just a plain text. It seems your are trying really hard to not get your game played. Just think about it. The moderators and hosts will have no way to verify that this is indeed your game, if you redirect them to some google drive.
Thanx Ryuzaki for telling me what to do for making my game more playable...
I will apply an hyperlink for the game......