Great looking little game! The art inside is quite nice, and fits very well with the theme; some of the art is fantastic and evokes great imagery. The gameplay is very narratively focused, and much of the rules structure and content supports this. The layout of the game looks good, the rules seem simple but capable of telling the collaborative stories the book intends. Lots of possible stories are covered.

Minor criticism for the main pdf: the white text on black looks really cool, and fits well with the art and theme of the game. But it is also very hard to read. A larger, chunkier font would alleviate this somewhat, as would greatly reducing the use of italics. Choosing slightly more complementary (less starkly contrasting) text vs background could also help.