i'll admit it, the story made me laugh.
if you want feedback: i think the game needs- well, feedback! when you hit a note or mess up screen shake or something could really liven stuff up. also maybe a song duration timer? and most importantly: display the score at all times! seeing big numbers get bigger makes brain happy
also also i liked the style of the sprites and animations
either way, i had fun playing. (:
side note: i had no clue you could put scratch games on itch, might upload a few of my old projects :)