The words were a bit difficult to see but I liked the game.
Visuals: 3/5 - The art style of the assets were cute. I also loved the style of the fruits and vegetables as well. I did not particularly like the vertical lines on the background, that was a bit distracting.
Gameplay: 3/5 - The gameplay loop is definitely there. I enjoyed playing. The only thing I wish was that there was more of a challenge or the bunny was allowed to jump if the space bar was allowed. I didn't like how slow the bunny was moving. I wish it were a tad faster.
Music: 3/5 - The music was nice. I wish there was a sound effect when you picked up items.
Immersiveness: 3/5 - I was definitely immersed by trying to win the game. It was agonizing to watch the bunny run so slow though.
Originality/Style: 3/5 - I think the game is original and the level design was well done. The style of the game is cute however, I have to keep in mind that third party assets were used (Nothing wrong with that. I only want to give credit where credit is due).
Hey, I appreciate all the feedback :) I will be updating this game now that the review period for the jam is over, so come check it out once it's updated!
I'm sorry I had some trouble figuring out how to play this game - I kept thinking that I was supposed to control the bunny. The words on the background of the tutorial say 'click no!' which threw me off - were they supposed to say 'click now' ? I would suggest adding a small blurb to the description or the tutorial saying like "Click on the platforms while Haru runs, timing them perfectly to help her reach her goal." or something similar just to keep the player on the right page.
That said, really solid game. I was very impressed with the level layout, you really have a knack for level design. Also the art choice / music is very cute. Well done! Make more games please. C:
Oh yeah the font I picked looked a little weird, that’s supposed to read “click me”. Will definitely be revising later. Glad you liked the game though :)
Really fun, the tutorial does a great job of explaining the mechanics. I'm not sure if the game is just over but after reaching the end of the first level, I'm just met with a hard stop on the music when I click the continue button and the music stops.
I wish the rabbit moved a bit faster and some platforms at the beginning and end of level 2 were more clearly explained - couldn't tell the first one could be moved at first, last one I thought could move all directions except down but I had to switch it with the one adjacent.
Hey, thanks for the feedback and glad you liked it. Definitely should have increased clarity on the platform rules but I ran out of time putting everything else in haha.
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The words were a bit difficult to see but I liked the game.
Visuals: 3/5 - The art style of the assets were cute. I also loved the style of the fruits and vegetables as well. I did not particularly like the vertical lines on the background, that was a bit distracting.
Gameplay: 3/5 - The gameplay loop is definitely there. I enjoyed playing. The only thing I wish was that there was more of a challenge or the bunny was allowed to jump if the space bar was allowed. I didn't like how slow the bunny was moving. I wish it were a tad faster.
Music: 3/5 - The music was nice. I wish there was a sound effect when you picked up items.
Immersiveness: 3/5 - I was definitely immersed by trying to win the game. It was agonizing to watch the bunny run so slow though.
Originality/Style: 3/5 - I think the game is original and the level design was well done. The style of the game is cute however, I have to keep in mind that third party assets were used (Nothing wrong with that. I only want to give credit where credit is due).
Overall: 3/5
Hey, I appreciate all the feedback :) I will be updating this game now that the review period for the jam is over, so come check it out once it's updated!
I'm sorry I had some trouble figuring out how to play this game - I kept thinking that I was supposed to control the bunny. The words on the background of the tutorial say 'click no!' which threw me off - were they supposed to say 'click now' ? I would suggest adding a small blurb to the description or the tutorial saying like "Click on the platforms while Haru runs, timing them perfectly to help her reach her goal." or something similar just to keep the player on the right page.
That said, really solid game. I was very impressed with the level layout, you really have a knack for level design. Also the art choice / music is very cute. Well done! Make more games please. C:
Oh yeah the font I picked looked a little weird, that’s supposed to read “click me”. Will definitely be revising later. Glad you liked the game though :)
Really fun, the tutorial does a great job of explaining the mechanics.
I'm not sure if the game is just over but after reaching the end of the first level, I'm just met with a hard stop on the music when I click the continue button and the music stops.
Yeah I only had time to implement one level haha. That button is supposed to close the game but since it’s a browser app it just stops…
Very cute platformer! I included it in my Cozy Spring Jam 2023 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look!
Awesome, glad you liked it!
Lovely game, fits all the themes of the jam.^^
I wish the rabbit moved a bit faster and some platforms at the beginning and end of level 2 were more clearly explained - couldn't tell the first one could be moved at first, last one I thought could move all directions except down but I had to switch it with the one adjacent.
Good job!
Hey, thanks for the feedback and glad you liked it. Definitely should have increased clarity on the platform rules but I ran out of time putting everything else in haha.