After playing this and the Pumpkin Pie game I had to double check that this competition didn't have a cookery category! I enjoyed the mechanic of gradually building a page of cookery blog, but there was a bit too much to read before you get to the punchline.

Seems like many others I missed the link on the last page on the first run though as I was kind of skimming the recipe section a bit waiting for the horror portion to start and was caught unawares of what I'd missed. I looked again and read it a bit more thoroughly the second time and found the link. Indiana Jones flashback ensued.

I liked that it was different, the spooky element was hidden and then came on strong in the end. I wish there was more foreshadowing though. I had a few issues with this game. The first is that the beginning was boring, I get the idea of having it seem like a real cooking blog, but something that was a bit off would have helped. Second was the walls of text, both the blog and recipe were so long without having anything exciting that I almost abandoned the game before I found the spooky twist--for real the recipe was so long I skimmed it and someone else had to point out the "human heart" in the ingredients, then I skimmed for how to prepare a human heart. 

I also think that it would have benefited from having multiple short recipes ans a shorter blog, then the recipe can change based on what you selected for your blog.  That would make the game more interesting. I like the concept, but as it is right now, I think it starts off too boring to entice a reader to keep going.

Really tugs at your heart strings. Especially at the end.