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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Creative Development | #19 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Final Presentation | #19 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Overall | #34 | 2.700 | 2.700 |
Technical / Workflow | #34 | 2.000 | 2.000 |
Project Documentation | #35 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Research + Development | #35 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- Hi Elmo An interesting scene and I like the construction notes along with your reference. I also like that there is some subtle animation for the veins in the entire scene. Here are some of my notes: 1. I'd like to see some more obvious pulsating of the veins that is done in worldspace - so it looks like the entire walling / flooring are connectd to each other. 2. This is a scene that could benefit alot from smaller details - such as greeble or even some irregular variations. Right now it's reading a bit too uniform 3. I have some concerns about the fog planes you use here - there are a lot of overlapping planes that would be an overdraw & performance nightmare. I'd try cutting it down a bit because in production this is something I would flag as a blocker. Good stuff otherwise!
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I like the vibe a lot! Great piece!
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