mr brine spooked me honestly, i thought he was gonna jump at me or something but i'm glad he didn't notice me lol. the characters and their dialogue, even floating texts were really well written and got me immersed in their world. for me, having a few more instances of that intrigue and world building in the moments that are currently more empty would take it to the next level.

Nice! The atmosphere you created with your clever dialogue and strange characters was excellent. I enjoyed my time with your game. One thing I think could have been fun would be expanding upon the platforming element- so making the paths a bit less linear and more challenging to reach the end of, maybe in a jump king kind of way. Overall great job!