Blood magic is a cool combat concept for a turn-based RPG!
Very fun! I had to play a few times, and I still haven't seen all the possibilities that I want to!
The only glitch I noticed is that when you click "Slumber" it kind of wigs out showing a batch of text before going black and giving the next bit of story.
And the only typo I noticed was when you say you don't want a drink it says "They'd look at you" and I assume the "They'd" is just supposed to be "They". Unless I am misunderstanding something.
I am excited to play through the other possibilities!
This was awesome!
The first thing I did was try to go up the stairs, did you purposely leave out the "not yet" there because you don't use them in that scene?
My favorite part was playing as the toy airplane. It was short, but after living in these (your?) childhood footsteps, controlling the flight of the plane sunk me into full force childlike imagination!
The descriptive taste of the raspberries definitely had me laughing after everything else.
Question:
In the first scene, was "hotdog" meant to be plural like the rest of the foods?
This was a very enjoyable story!
We all know writer's block at some point and it is cool to read a story about someone struggling with it.
I enjoyed the options. At first, I was drawn to the folded-up piece of paper, but then I was inclined to read them in chronological order. I decided to indulge my first instinct, and I think it made the story much better. It led me down a path where I started out more capable of relating with the character, as I learned about them. And even though I related the least with the last one I chose, I had a greater understanding and draw to the character.
One Question: At the beach, were they sharing one pb&j sandwich? Or was it meant to be "sandwiches"?