Would love to have some feedback on what could be better besides spelling and grammar. I kinda ran out of time with this so there are some things I couldn't flesh out but wanted to.
Hey, this game is very cool. I'm blown away by the amount of setting detail you developed in such a short amount of time!
I'm sorry if I missed it, but I can't find in the document what your core resolution mechanic is? When there's a challenge, what do players do to determine success or failure? I understand how to calculate my bonuses based on my stats, but is it a "roll d20 + stat bonus", or something else?
You've hooked me with your premise, I think it would be worth (when you want, and have time) to flesh out some of the mechanical elements to help me, the player, tell stories that fit in your setting.