Challenging game! I included it in my Geta Game Jam 10 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look. :)

Well... As a french, it was REALLY hard to play your game ^^ But here's my opinion (4th game I play on the game jam by the way).

Goods:
-I really like the paper-ish artistic direction, and the music is so cute and good!
-The concept is pretty cool, the fact that you interpreted the theme like this is fun to see.
-It's not really important, but you put a real effort into making your game, you did options for the resolution, the volume etc... and little pop-ups to help the player.

Things to change (in my opinion obviously):
-Well, evidently the fact that the game is only in english and isn't accessible to other languages. I may know most of the words in your preview image, but they don't come in mind when I play the game (the only thing I could find is "Imaginary Troll" xD ). But, well, I understand this problem is not for everybody, it's only for me in this jam (I don't know if there are other non-english people who participated).
-Oh, it's not in the game itself, but you should really put separated files, because here you propose 5 differents files in the same folder and it become heavy.

Generally:
A good game with a good concept and a good artistic direction, but not adapted to non-english.

Great music and cute graphics! There isn't that much to the game, but it's an interesting take on the theme.