Nice soft opener, though it still has that midi cello sound - one thing to make strings sound more realistic is to overlap the attack and release so that the transition is more seamless in volume, otherwise you get this unnatural dampening of the sound from note to note on every note.

I like that the mix is balanced and not overpowering. I think that it would benefit from a little compression, and having dynamics that are a little more organic, which can be hard with VSTs, but it is doable!

Great work! Also, really dig the vocal part towards the end.

Well, I think the mix is just awesome! And ye, for sure felt those tomb raider vibes :D

Really enjoyed, congrats on your first submission! :)

Take care

Awesome job for your first jam!  I thought the mix was pretty well balanced and I can definitely feel the lost and somber tones being conveyed here.

Fantastic arrangement and mix.  Sombre yet woodsy mood.  Your blend of natural instruments and synthetic ones is very tasteful and I doubt a casual listener would even detect any synthesizers used in this track at all.  You know how to make a nice full, juicy sound and it was extremely pleasant!!  I think I listened to it about 5 times.  Great submission!

Oh... It's been a magical journey! The combination of instruments, the magical melody and the slightly epic chorus is perfect!

P.S. The mixing is good!

Love the sounds in this! Especially the use of percussion 

Nice