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A jam submission

Gogol: The OvercoatView game page

The game where you will be a Perpetual Titular Councillor
Submitted by dany999pa — 4 hours, 30 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creativity#572.5202.615
Usability#582.3722.462
Overall#672.1132.192
Art#732.0012.077
Enjoyment#801.5571.615

Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Nice and simple! Could add some more gameplay to it so it's not just purely typing

Developer

I'm working on it. If you have any ideas for gameplay, you can write to me. I have some difficult questions with this one.

Submitted(+1)

Interesting, but I'm sorry to say it is not my cup of tea.

Developer

I understanding that this game is not ready yet, and it's not for everyone. But thanks anyway for playing my game)

Submitted(+1)

agree with @gamerblook23's points. You potentially could add health for mistakes when typing.

Developer

I'm pondering the idea about health management, but iI have some complex questions with this one.

Submitted(+1)

Well voice acted. A more engaging gameplay loop would have helped the story seem more interesting. Good job though, unique idea.

Developer

Thanks, I appreciate it. I will try to make my game playable.

Submitted(+1)

I like this idea! Also I love the soundtrack of the reading man and the music. Additionally the concept of the days. Btw what was the health for? I think you might have to work on the gameplay, so that the game becomes more exiting. The player does not really have a choice. Maybe you could add decisions or give points for fast writing or ask questions in a quiz afterwards.

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the review) The health was a part of a future idea. I leave it in order to fill the screen with something.

In plans: 

  1. Add health and money managment
  2. Add more challengeable writing process
Submitted

Ah okay I see, sounds very cool!