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A jam submission

Пустой гаражView game page

When you`re on the run, you don`t notice details. Not for the first time.
Submitted by Klockwerk Kat — 3 hours, 37 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall feeling#251.6675.000
Narration#251.6675.000
Originality#251.3334.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

Avoid the cops and get to the drop point…!!!
Vivid  and exciting writing (google translate)… gauntlet-style with sudden deaths.

I'd prefer to keep going than re-start. My handicap with the language makes reading worse (I have to copy/paste). Interrupted by starting over again and again and again and again…, the thriller story loses momentum, and the atmospheric descriptions don't benefit with repetition.

The "story" is exciting, but the "game" is just guesswork and remembering the choice sequence. I'd prefer a strategy to my choices, or at least not capital punishment for guessing wrong. But I guess it does add the element of danger.

Developer (1 edit)

Thank you a lot for the critics!

I've tried to mitigate the dullness of repetition by giving the PC some agency, but I suppose it is not strong enough.