Play book
đŸ“˜London siblings's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #2 | 4.167 | 4.167 |
| Writing Quality | #2 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Use of Theme | #2 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
| Jolt Factor (originality) | #4 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Great idea to make the location function almost as a character in the dialogue! London comes alive in the role you give it as a stage for acts. You might want to look into adding something about this incident in the Tower of London if you expand this story. It is even about siblings! https://www.hrp.org.uk/tower-of-london/history-and-stories/the-princes-in-the-tower/
And nothing takes the glamour out of murder like death. Quite unexpected news.