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A jam submission

"what remains of revenge"View game page

Submitted by cedes (@dolavonde) — 1 minute, 29 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme Interpretation#333.0003.000
Gameplay Polish#332.7142.714
Aesthetics#433.1433.143
Originality/Creativity#492.7142.714
Magical Girl Concept#552.2862.286
Overall#552.4492.449
Engagement/Fun#572.1432.143
Audio#671.1431.143

Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the Magical Girl genre?
More Magical Lady, magical staff, crown, and sword

Which theme(s) do you pick?
Grevious Lady

How does your game fit those theme(s)?
She sure is grevious, and how her power made and destroyed her

Were the assets for your game made during the jam? Elaborate as you see fit.
yes! Wish I could have done more

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It's short, it's an interesting start! I see it's labeled as a prologue. I don't know anyone else here who did that, ;)

Doing a prologue for a game jam is definitely a smart idea, as trying to cram a whole game into a short dev period is usually tough, and ends with half-finished (or less) games. That said, this game really threw me right into it all, with very little world building, introduction to characters, etc. If you plan to expand this, I'd love to see more of that! As it stands now, there are interesting elements, but as a player it's hard to get invested knowing so little about the setting and story.

Art is really good though! That kept me going, even if it wasn't all finished. I really liked the overall style and look of the game. I wish there had been some music, even if it was just stock/free music.

Overall this a great start! I hope you'll keep working on it.