I like that there was still tension with Aster genuinely feeling hungry but trying to ignore it while it does actively put a strain on her. Also the joy of just physical intimacy that isn't just sex and having that be something our protag missed and longed for is something I always appreciate seeing in ace rep. There's a lot of polish in the menus and UI, which made it feel surprising that the kitchen CG was still a rough sketch (though still very cute!)

Nice way to present The raven. Is also a good idea to put the date of publication and the journal where this poetry was published first.

Also the scary touch at the end was not bad.

I liked the retro minimalist graphics style.

Only three stars because it could be a bit more varied and less repetitive with its "take the sheet, read it and go to the armchair".