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A jam submission

Before You DepartView game page

Slice-of-death visual novel.
Submitted by Team Lycoris, Camazule (@camazule), Bowser Puma (@chordprogvn), Arcadia Adair (@ArcadiaAdair_), CetusOtter, Rackoon (@TheRackoon) — 2 hours, 55 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#14.8084.808
Presentation#14.9234.923
Creativity#14.9234.923

Ranked from 104 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Team Members
Author - Cetus
Artist - Arcadia Adair
Coding - Bowser Puma
Music - Camazule
GUI - Rackoon/AZiDBUNZ

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This is so good! I almost cried during one of the later scenes, and I rarely cry from VNs (Only Adastra, Shelter and Remember the Flowers so far)! Also I love Memento so much! His begging-like sprite creeped me out a bit, but that’s what you get from him being the Grim Reaper! And I see what you did there, Memento and Mori ;3

Developer(+4)

Fun fact: Originally, his name was going to be Morty so it wasn't exactly Memento Mori. However, upon reading it, Arcadia told me VEHEMENTLY that we should not do that. 


Yes, it's entirely because of Rick & Morty.

(+3)

poggers

(+7)

Remember the Flowers was the first visual novel to make me cry. I can proudly say that Before You Depart is now the second visual novel to do so. A masterful, hauntingly beautiful conversation about life, death, and the point of it all. It doesn't provide any answers. Nothing ever can except for the moment when our time comes, but this is one of those pieces of media that can get the conversation going.


Please take a moment to tell someone you care about that you love them today. You never know when they'll be gone.

(+2)

The story The arts and music really puts me into the characters feelings throughout the whole story,And the ending is so melancholic mix with  the music and art I couldn't  help but feel emotional at the end .

 This surpasses all the other VN's of this jam by quality  hands down.

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Very nice. The polish and the amount of effort put into every facet of the game is seriously impressive, especially for a game jam project. Given that staring at those same three sprites for like 20 games in a row gets inevitably kind of monotonous, I appreciate the choice to forego the game jam sprites in favor of original character designs, especially in how it allows the project to fully pursue its own visual style.

Narratively, the story is not necessarily the most original or subtle take on the concept, even if it is very delightful as an interpretation of the basic MY WOLF premise. But the prose is good and the dialogue is good (apart from the shouting section that leans too far towards melodrama, being so long and in ALL CAPS, and feels kind of unearned to me as a result), and the visuals and the music add a lot to the atmosphere. It's a satisfying read all around; my thanks to everyone involved for their hard work.

(+1)

this game is amazing it deserves first spot  !!!

please check it out , i promise it's worth your time

(+3)

If for some reason this does not win the jam, the jam is rigged


Like it's not even a contest, this surpasses by far the quality of all other VN's of the jam by far 

(+6)

(I'll just repost my rabid babbling about this MASTERPIECE and hope it fits the comment lmao)

Yall.

you're gonna want to play this shit NOW.

nooooowwwwwwww

TGTRXFDHTR IT'S FUCKING INSANE

>fffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkk dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeee oh my GODDDDDDDDDDD this rocked my fucking shit

>I did NOT expect them to go this hard UITHRDLXUIHDXGFBHRD

>HOLY S H I  T

>LIKE YEAH I KNEW IT WAS ABOUT SMTH IN REGARDS TO MOVING ON/THE AFTER LIFE BUT WOW

>W O O O OO O OO  W W WW W  W

>THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMONG MY FAVORITES NOW THAT'S INSANE

i'LL JUST POST THIS HERE FROM THE THREAD CAUSE HOLY S H I T

I DID NOT EXPECT THEM TO GO THIS HARD FOR A FRICKING MY WOLF JAM

LITERALLY EVERY SINGLE PERSON FROM THE TEAM POPPED THEIR HARDEST PUSSIES FOR THIS PROJECT AND IT S H  O W S

i am actually at fucking awe how fucking well they handled such a fucking classic as a post mortem moving-on story 

genuinely insane

they nailed absolutely every single emotion possible you could have in a story like this

the fucking joy, the hope the empaty the absolute SADNESS and dispair in this

holy fuck dude

AND THIS IS ALL TAKING INTO THE ACCOUNT OF LIKE

HOW EVERYTHING WAS CRAFTED SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFULLY, NARRATIVE, ART AND MUSIC ALL SETTING THE MOST BEAUTIFUL FUCKING SCENES.

ACTUAL BATSHIT STUFF.

like oh my  g o d ???

hcthrd LIKE THIS HAD EVERYTHING TO WOO ME AND LITERALLY ANY FUCKIN ONE

this could make fucking waves even outside the furry niche there's no way

it's that fucking good you can just show this to anyone

it's beautiful

honestly

HTDFBXGTDHR

I DID NOT EXPECT THIS JAM TO PUMP OUT ONE OF MY GENUINE FAVORITES SHORT VNS TO DATE

I am genuinely feeling so fucking FULL after such a fucking experience

IT'S GOD SO RARE TO FEEL THIS

HTGCFTHRDGFRHTD SO FEW THINGS THAT CAN SHAKE YOU UP LIKE THIS IT'S SO FUCKING LOVELY

god i fucking love existential stories like this they resonate so fucking well

and they KILLED it

they absolutely did

this is the epitome of well executed classics 

HTBGRFXHD THEY JUST REALLY WANTED TO FLEX

LIKE THATS HOW YOU FUCKING MAKE A BEAUTIFUL ASS ROMANCE

GIVE ME AN UNIMAGINABLE INFINITE BEING LEARNING TO LOVE FROM A TRAGICALLY FINITE PERSON

THAS THE RIZZ

actually fucking RACKING my brain with the amount of stuff you can fucking say about this

ugh

it's so fucking good

it's so soft and beautiful 

every aspect of the art is just. immaculate

like I LOVE the black and red palette for HORROR but man

man they made that shit just, BEAUTIFUL in the most romantic way of the word

it all plays so fucking well together

literally a fucking theater play

it takes the breath outta you

literally just read this

read this and give the creators the best fucking thanks you can if you like it cause holy shit they deserve it

they did NOT need to give us something so fucking HTFGXBTHR MASSIVELY GOOD LIKE THIS

IN SUCH A SHORT PERIOD OF TIME

but yeah like, just hearing about it and  the premise and everything is really not enough to do it justice with how everything harmonizes together in the story and you really have to read it yourself to like GET the amount of effort put into this

HELL I DIDNT EVEN TALK ABOUT THE MUSIC YET LMAO

GENUINELY LOOKING FORWARD TO WHAT ELSE CAMAZULE HAS COOKING BECAUSE THE DUDE KNEW EXACTLYYYYYYYYY HOW TO SET UP EVERY FUCKIN SCENE AND KEEP THE STYLE CONSISTENT ACROSS THE BOARD

but thats even harder to describe with words because it's honestly just something you'll be blasted away by the moment you open up the VN, i loved every single track

god i am absolutely gonna be recommending this to people long after the jam n shit lmao

actually an experience

-------------------and heres the SPOILERY BIT of what i had to say for the bit where they go over the 4 years-------------------

Ok.THIS scene. Thiiiiiiiiiis fucking scene. they SNAPPED. god they did SO FUCKING GODLY. Hell we've all seen a scene like this, the terminal illness patient or someone just simply at the cusp of their death monologuing about their life, their trajectory towards death and whatnot but man. IT does take some fucking PIZZAZZ to nail that shit WELL. LIKE MAKE IT SINK INTO YOU LIKE THIS. ONCE again the fucking DREAM team over here aligning writing, art and music to just suspend you in this fucking vaccuum of a memory, like god that was actually fucking beautiful.

I ADORE how the illustrations are basically like ancient greek vase illustrations depicting his spiral also alluding to his love for the theater, like THIS was his one play. And just the utter loneliness of the music, thats quiet and grainy, droning as you read. Ugh. It's so good. it's done so fucking WELL. Cetus popped the fuck off, i really should've known he would, with the way he wrote shit in ICO he had a knack for emotional scenes already, like giving characters real substance you can FEEL. this ACTUALLY MAKES ME SO ECSTATIC ABOUT THE FUTURE OF ICO BECAUSE OF IT TOO LMAO. DUDE IS GOOD. REALLY GOOD. Actually fucking brilliant narrative, that was wonderful and resonated in. a lot of ways . (MOST SPECIALLY THE WHOLE THING ABOUT BEING A CREATIVE PERSON BEING FORCED INTO DULL CAREERS FOR THE SAKE OF LIVING COMFORTABLY THAT WAS FUCKING H A  UN TING TO RELATE TO,,,)

woooweee thats GOOD. THEY COOKED. HTRDFGXBTHRD THEY COOKED SO FUCKING HARD FOR SUCH A SILLY LITTLE GAME JAM THEME

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(+4)

this vn broke me. hadnt cried in months. sobbed until i struggled to breathe. really beautiful. give this a read and you wont be disappointed.

(+5)

Its rare for me to get so emotionally moved by a piece of media. The last time I felt like I'm on the verge of crying from a piece of media was the Violet Evergrace Movie. And I thought it would be a long while for me to get into that state again.

Well, then there's Before We Depart.

With the amazing presentation of the beautiful, expressive art by Arcadia, the engrossing music from Camazule (not to forget the efforts Bowser and Rackoon have done to bring it all together) and I cannot forget my talented friend Cetus, the author of this vn to absolutely destroy me.

While I am familiar with cetus' writing style, he has really put his all into making this story, with some laughs and mostly cries, this VN is absolutely one of my favorites in recent years. 

A story about death that's not only harrowing but hopeful is something I will remember for a long, long time.

I hope Team Lycoris get as much attention as it deserves and the members within continue to put their passion into their separate projects.

Thank you for this important piece of media.

(+3)

One of  the best VNs I've ever read 

(+3)

I did not expect to be sobbing at the end. Such great music and art too. I think this will be a very big highlight for me, not just in the jam but from all the furry VNs I've read in general. 

(+2)

Didn't know I'd want to wax philosophical with a doggo-grim-reaper, but it was great. Sweet writing, and banger art and music

(+5)

Before you Depart is a really good oneshot VN. Wasn't expecting much novel from the May Wolf contest, but ByD definitely wowed me.


I'm very familiar with Cetus' writing, and enjoyed seeing him writing for a very different character than Judah (ICO). The writing flowed well, the pacing of the scenes worked and didn't feel drug out. 


I also really enjoyed the art style for this VN, Arcadia really hit it out of the park. I liked the expressionist CGs that felt right out of an Edvard Munch painting, and some of the cutouts felt very inspired by Revolutionary Girl Utena. Only thing that i felt could use a little tweaking is that Memento didn't quite mesh. Maybe that's purposeful given his character, but the design felt a little incoherent.


I also really liked the space waltz music, it was a nice use of original music to highlight a key moment.


All in all, would def reccomend you give this a look. Stories like this have been told before, but everything works together to deliver a vivid experience.

(+3)

this definitely made me cry.
out of all my wolf jams i read this one is the best one atm
the presentation and art style is amazing as well as it having a limited yet amazing colour palette.
over all 11/10 hope you win

(+2)

This really did make me ugly cry, and I'm actually thanking you for it.

(+3)

I don't normally want to cry over these short stories, but this just hits your where it hurts. Bravo, truly. What a masterpiece.

(+3)

The game is very well crafted with the imagery and the storyline. It made me cry and I do not cry easily, but it was easy to become attached to the characters. I loved the parallels frpm the final scene to the beginning, like it was a full circle. Great job guys! 

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