Frankly impressed with the art of the game, I don't know if it's my imagination, but I like the inspiration of the "Monster" series within the game. If I had to mention something perhaps it would be that I would like some characters to have a more "natural, tension-free" posture. Omitting that, I am impressed by the level of the game to be for a Jam, what a great job!
Hi, thanks a lot for your kind and honest review ! : )
I did think about Monster while drawing the art at some point, but I didn't think other people would have the same thought, so I'm pretty surprised and happy to hear this haha. Regarding the character's postures, I'll do my best to improve !
The blend of visual novel and point-and-click elements worked really well! The art style is lovely, and having the phone as an interactive feature was a cool addition. A few bugs popped up, but they didn’t take away from the fun. Overall, I had a really enjoyable experience! 😊
I liked the music and art! I thought the mini games were great. I enjoyed the interrogation scene, and the phone being interactive was a nice touch.
For the writing, the story sometimes felt a bit unclear and rushed to me. I got two different endings and they felt pretty quick, which was a bit unsatisfying. I also think some proofreading could have been nice. But considering English is the writer’s second language, this is well done!
There are bugs here and there which is a bit annoying, but nothing big enough to stop me from enjoying the game.
Hi! Thank you very much for your honest review, as a writer for the game I take all of the feedback very serously, as this is my first such project. The story evolved greatly throughout the whole process, and many problems with the story are caused by that. I learnt a lot about how to write and design, but that will have to wait for my next project.
Anyway, thank you again for the feedback, I really appreciate that!
Hiii, co-creator of Glass Thoughts here, if you have any thoughts (they dont have to be glass) after the playthrough and want to share your feedback about the writing, I will appreciate that greatly! This is my first such project, and the first thing written entirely in English, which is my second language, so all feedback is welcome!
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Frankly impressed with the art of the game, I don't know if it's my imagination, but I like the inspiration of the "Monster" series within the game. If I had to mention something perhaps it would be that I would like some characters to have a more "natural, tension-free" posture. Omitting that, I am impressed by the level of the game to be for a Jam, what a great job!
Hi, thanks a lot for your kind and honest review ! : )
I did think about Monster while drawing the art at some point, but I didn't think other people would have the same thought, so I'm pretty surprised and happy to hear this haha. Regarding the character's postures, I'll do my best to improve !
The blend of visual novel and point-and-click elements worked really well! The art style is lovely, and having the phone as an interactive feature was a cool addition. A few bugs popped up, but they didn’t take away from the fun. Overall, I had a really enjoyable experience! 😊
Thank you for playing and sharing your thoughts!
Nice game!
I liked the music and art! I thought the mini games were great. I enjoyed the interrogation scene, and the phone being interactive was a nice touch.
For the writing, the story sometimes felt a bit unclear and rushed to me. I got two different endings and they felt pretty quick, which was a bit unsatisfying. I also think some proofreading could have been nice. But considering English is the writer’s second language, this is well done!
There are bugs here and there which is a bit annoying, but nothing big enough to stop me from enjoying the game.
I had fun! :)
Hi! Thank you very much for your honest review, as a writer for the game I take all of the feedback very serously, as this is my first such project. The story evolved greatly throughout the whole process, and many problems with the story are caused by that. I learnt a lot about how to write and design, but that will have to wait for my next project.
Anyway, thank you again for the feedback, I really appreciate that!
Hiii, co-creator of Glass Thoughts here, if you have any thoughts (they dont have to be glass) after the playthrough and want to share your feedback about the writing, I will appreciate that greatly! This is my first such project, and the first thing written entirely in English, which is my second language, so all feedback is welcome!