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(+3)

Nice game!

I liked the music and art! I thought the mini games were great. I enjoyed the interrogation scene, and the phone being interactive was a nice touch.

For the writing, the story sometimes felt a bit unclear and rushed to me. I got two different endings and they felt pretty quick, which was a bit unsatisfying. I also think some proofreading could have been nice. But considering English is the writer’s second language, this is well done!

There are bugs here and there which is a bit annoying, but nothing big enough to stop me from enjoying the game.

I had fun! :)

(+2)

Hi! Thank you very much for your honest review, as a writer for the game I take all of the feedback very serously, as this is my first such project. The story evolved greatly throughout the whole process, and many problems with the story are caused by that. I learnt a lot about how to write and design, but that will have to wait for my next project.

Anyway, thank you again for the feedback, I really appreciate that!