Pretty well written, emotional, and quite endearing. The way the narrative is subtly presented makes it easier for myself to enter the character's shoes. I do agree with the comments that it needed a bit more audio to complete the experience. But overall a short, neat, profound story!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Use of Theme | #5 | 4.222 | 4.222 |
| Gameplay / Fun Factor | #10 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #11 | 3.222 | 3.222 |
| Audio / Music | #18 | 1.778 | 1.778 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- I felt the interactions in the game were a real treat. I wish the point and click elements were better expanded upon to give the game more direct interactions, but the story is well written and presented emotionally, allowing a glimpse into the mindset of those who deal with this reality every day. Spelling errors were present, but not enough to not understand the purpose of the story.
- Very well written and relatable story. More gameplay activity needed tho, item details, audio, etc.
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