Really interesting idea, but maybe move the camera back a little bit. Also, you might want to check spelling and grammar: "So if you fall OF you respawn". Are you planning on further developing this piece? Either way, good luck in your endeavours!

Looks promising, Only problem is the ball doesn't seem to roll properly. It gets to the point you're upside down and then just rolls back to where it was instead. Other than that, it's got good potential. I love the idea of the camera as well