The writing is great and I love how the different the routes are based on what you choose. The twist was genuinely surprising and really well executed. The art is also very cute and well made. My only note would be to emphasize the importance of the "Read me" text. I had skipped it initially and didn't know any of the controls. I would also add a note about the filter being the pink glasses. I found it out from a comment on the game page. It's definitely possible to figure out, but simply stating it would make it easier for the player. Overall, wonderful game. It captured my attention every second.