I really liked this game, it was very melancholic. I loved this sad feeling of returning home to a place that has just sort of rusted and withered away, and the artwork and music did a lot to make it contemplative and moving. I hope you continue to make more games in this world, it is very clear that you have some more stories to tell in this setting and with these characters!

I like the concept and general mood/atmosphere of the story, and would love to read more one day. The art is lovely. I like the use of the theme. Unfortunately there were quite a few typos. which took me out of the reading experience, a little bit.