I like the concept and general mood/atmosphere of the story, and would love to read more one day. The art is lovely. I like the use of the theme. Unfortunately there were quite a few typos. which took me out of the reading experience, a little bit.
yea i had a feeling there would be typos. bad dyslexia here. read it so many times but i guess i still missed some lol. i will hopefully try and fix some and update for that. if you or anyone else wants to point out any specifics it would certainly be welcomed
decided to just push out a quick update with what i can find, considering the Jam rating and all happening rn. but if you do want to replay youre always free to let me know what you see :P may likely still be some grammar issues still
