Just like Leonardo's, I am proud of this fantastic submission. You have detailed character descriptions  and an evolving fantasy story, super cool :)

Thank you for participating in the first of these narrative jam series! Truly, I am inspired by your work.

Add some screenshots or your document in HTML5. Unfortunately, many people won't take the time to download documents or they are afraid of viruses.

They trust downloading documents if the Itch user has a great deal of followers or a studio behind them.