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Nitro-Music Rumble Season #1's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Use of theme and limitations | #1 | 4.167 | 4.167 |
| Composition | #2 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
| Quality | #2 | 4.333 | 4.333 |
| Overall | #2 | 4.200 | 4.200 |
| Vibe | #3 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Mixing | #3 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
The title of your submission
Your Final Battle
Program(s) used
FL-Studio
VST Plugin(s) used
East West Symphonic Orchestra Platinum
Keyscrape
BBC Symphonic Orchestra
The Free Orchestra (ProjectSAM)
EZDrummer3
SGM and Touhou Soundfont
Have you used the sub-theme? If so, how did you do it?
I didn't but wanted to.
Have you made everything by yourself?
Yes
Did you take inspiration from another creation?
At the start, I was stuck, so I listened to one of my older songs to get some inspiration.
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Comments
Very nice !
I love the way your music tells a story. Even without the commentary in your video we understand where we are going.
I like the change of tone when the hero is dead(?). It goes from D minor to Ebm.
The orchestration is great and the whole is very coherent.
But as I like to nitpick and we are also here to talk about the points on which we can progress, I would say that your themes and your melodies are at the same time a little too backward compared to the general harmony and that they are a little "messy". I took the time to listen several times to your creation and I think I understood why I have this feeling.
If you agree, I will post a more detailed explanation. Is that okay?
But I remind you that I find your music very very good.
go ahead, I actually went from white keys only to black keys only because that's fun
This is your flute melody at 2'29".
First, at bar 5, the melody starts on a sixth and it's a bit clashing.
Then, the musical phrases from bars 1 to 4 and bars 5 to 8 are different in terms of rhythm and melody. This does not give the feeling of having a question and an answer but a long sentence of 8 bars. Especially that bars 3 and 4 give the feeling that the musical phase is finished. So it sounds strange to the ear. It doesn't have a rule, but it would sound better if you took the same thing as bar 1 in bar 5 (either rhythmically or melodically) and put a variation in bar 7 and 8.
This is just an example. It's far from exactly what you should do :)
I should learn more music theory to understand all of what you said, but thank you! The different rythms kinda drive the listener forwards for me.